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Re: The Wolf Pack Ch 1 + part 1-2 of ch 2 edited.
hey that was great! i really liked it. it was all really detailed, even in the first few sentences. the grammar is great too! i didnt see any mistakes, not ...
Dec 3, 2009 -
Re: Burning.
That was great! i like the way you said mascara running down her face, but dont you only use mascara on the top lashes? eyeliner is the thing that gets ...
Dec 3, 2009