~Volant~

No, this isn't the end; yes, there's more, but with all of the good reviews, I'm terrified to put it out there. XD It needs work, big time. The end ...

XD Thanks for noting it, Cooldude...I was trying to portray that Sage was trying to avoid the subject. It's his last night alive; he's trying to forget that he's going ...

Jiggity, the reason I withheld the information about their ages is because I'm trying to capture their ages the best I can in their dialogue. A thirty-year-old would talk differently ...

XD Thanks Jiggity, very much. Exactly the kind of critics I'm looking for. It's my first play, and I want to know exactly what's wrong with it. Thanks for not ...

Oooh! It just has to be the characters! I love it when my characters become fully fleshed out and they sit next to me like not-so-silent ghosts. My characters become ...

Dixco moves? Nah. He's got to know some ballet XD hahaha jk jk. ballerina robot....ew. He'd help me name my characters and help me develop them better. Yes, he would.

Vee smiles at the place and rubs her head, trying to abate the headache that just attacked her. She's never been here before, but she noticed the warmth and the ...

8/10. I'm not really a romantic person, but it reminds me of a song my sister always used to sing, and it brought fond memories. :D

Someone prone to random bursts of energy, someone obsessed with the sun, or someone who thinks solar energy is the next thing and is very green. :) ~Volant~

Mechanical. XD They're always sharp, while wooden pencils always dull and flatten out. Also, wooden pencil writing is easy to smudge; I'm sorry, but it's a pet peeve of mine ...

I, myself, voted "creating characters." Absolutely love it. There's a magic in creating new people who think and feel for themselves and will eventually spiral away from your control, with ...

I personally think it's easier to write a play, but it certainly is maddening because you have almost no control on how your audience will see your characters. You jsut ...

Hey, Vox! How's it going? First off, it's way too fast. I feel like yanking on the reins. I don't know anything about this tribe, anything about this girl, anything ...

Scene VIII (It’s early morning. There’s barely any light coming in through the window. Mute is half asleep, propped up against the bars of Sage’s cell. Blaine is pacing restlessly, ...

Scene VII (It’s later in the night. Mute and Prate are sound asleep, while Sage is wide awake, staring at nothing. Blaine is in his escape mindset.) SAGE: You should ...