~Volant~

It wasn't the first time Ember cursed the little creature that had blinded her. As far as she knew, these people were the ones who burned this village. She couldn't ...

It's a good idea. I understand it. When I was a newbie, I got all tangled up in the site. It's improved, now, so it's easier to navigate, but what ...

I'm trying to apply for this writing camp, and I've done all the protfolio requirements...except one thing. The personal essay on how I love to write and how going to ...

Great idea! I do agree with the padding issue, though. Other than that, there will always be past things to review. The problem with work is that instead of getting ...

I'm surprised a grandfather would talk about his war stories, especially so bloody and horrible, especially to his young grandson. A war veteren normally doesn't like to talk about the ...

[quote="Derek_Fantasy"] Chapter 1 The Coming Sota was sitting on his bed studying. The final exams were coming up and he need to get the best score in his class. It ...

I like this story! I especially like the idea of telling the story from the teacher's POV, and the description of Olivia. You could go far with this story idea, ...

oooh, I really really like! This is good, mate! Yes, I liked it. Great imagery, and it's sort of something that you have to read again. Something about life being ...

I liked it. Drawn into the story. One thing, however, is that I'm sure your character has a sense of smell. if he didn't, I think you would've said so. ...

Hiya, Errant! Jabbar got most of the grammatical errors, so I'll skip that part. Cute story, but one thing: At the end, the "it" suddenly became a she. You can ...

True. So totally true. I wouldn't exactly call it a story, though. But I'd bet you could make this into a wicked poem!

lol made me laugh. Great emotion behind it all. The problem is, I have no idea how old your character is. He seems to have the mindset of a fifteen-year-old, ...

yeah, pretty tight trick with the tea-bag, huh? However, I agree with what everyone else said. This is an indented story. A very good story, and a very good poem, ...

Wait, so Myles likes Rame, but keeps hitting him? And you know how I said Rame has major thrill issues? Niyana has major anger issues. I like the two together; ...

heh-heh. Demon-fish. Rat. heh-heh. really good character interaction. Rame constantly trying to get on someone's nerves...that kid has some serious thrill issues, mate. Lol! A little unrealistice, aga