~Volant~

personally, I'm for Romney. He's very sure of himself and very expirienced with government and politics. A lot of people won't vote for him because of his religion, though, but ...

I wish I could give it some wicked, rolling muscles...But I don't know how...*scans the internet for something that could show her how...*

Interesting plot and characters, but it does lack a lot of things. “Why are you doing this?” Daun asked. A bit of a cliche, doncha think, mate? “I want more ...

Why, yes, it is a fish. In a bowl. lol Hey, that's really cool! I love all the color. The only issues I have are the cool greens and blues ...

Yay, he's freeeeee!! :D What do you think? Editted! I changed my dragon up a bit, and at the moment I'm playing around with muscles and limbs, even some color, ...

I loved this! I love the beach! I wrote a poem about it once. The sea is wicked awesome!!! Only one thing, though: Along its surface the wind tears across ...

“I’m sorry about your family,” I said, “Not having food in all. You can come over here if you need more.” In should be and. Unless you wanted your character ...

Editted! is it any better?

(And definitely don't try basing your story off another. You can keep in mind some element you liked from the story, but you should really try and make it your ...

wow, really cool! :D I personally love stories with people on the run! One thing: "Suddenly, the rain stopped." Ugh. Please, try not to use suddenly like this. It makes ...

Darn it, I was trying to make the bleeding fingers as not-scary as possible....dang. It was creepier when I wrote it late at night, but I guess it didn't work ...

Aw, I like this! It's cute! "He tackled me to the ground and I laughed, the hat flying off into the dust. He started tickling my sides and I rolled ...

This essay is to apply to a writing camp. They get around 5,000 and only 100 get in. yeah. I'm trying to get this as good as I can get ...

Name: Alex Slinders Age: 15 Gender: M Physical Description: tall with olive colored skin and piercing green eyes. thick black hair and prefers loose tee-shirts and jeans. History: Grew up ...

I've got one more; Badwagon. Making someone feel stupid for doing something. Like, "No one in their right mind would wear orange."