~Volant~

Omg, the exact same thing happened to me! For the longest time! >.< I'd work on two ideas at the same time. I do this a lot; it was the ...

Heh. By the time November comes, we're all going to be so sick and tired of these canidates we'll be eating our own ears off to be rid of them. ...

The thing with Clinton is that someone either hates her or loves her. I have met very, very few people who are nuetral with her. I don't think it would ...

Romney- Probably my favorite candidate. He is interesting, conservative, and has a strong personality. The only thing I really question is his beliefs. Not that I would vote either way ...

Quite a few grammar issues, but I'll fix that in a moment. It has great potential, but I agree with the others (Show don't tell). The story has a great ...

Tyler was sitting on a log, chewing a hot dog, when he saw a dog trotting up to him with bright eyes. It whinned piteiously, then sat at his feet, ...

Ooh, radiation accidents! I like! :D However, I have no idea what her wings look like. Are they big and white and fluffy? Or are they heavy and torn and ...

I would vote for whoever has the best social policies (pro-life instead of pro-death, teaching the Bible in schools instead of trying to get us to be like Muslims, etc.). ...

I have absolutely no dirt whatsoever on Obama; he's a good, honest guy with good, honest intentions. Most of the unpratriotic claims are hoaxes. My only problem with him is ...

Oh, I liked this! Very well written, and good flow! Well done, mate! Reagan swore aloud, but not above a whisper. His dad was upstairs, asleep, but the rules of ...

Whoa, whoa, whoa! Slow it down! This should be at least four chapters, at least! You cram waaaay too much into one, you leave your reader staring at the page ...

3) She has much more experience than Obama, which leads me to believe that she will actually do what she says, rather than Obama who says more than what he'd ...

I really like that last sword one. The light around it and the gloom behind it is really cool. But the hilt looks way too long. Shorten that up a ...

Thank you for all of your ideas! I didn't notice that the poor thing was choking....oops. lol I did try to make him/her smile, but I suppose I failed. I'll ...

Volant, while I couldn't disagree with you more on your choice of candidate, I appreciate that you seem to have actual issues in mind. But I question your assertion of ...