~Volant~

Hello my dear this was great even though i don't know what Los Malos is. Thank you! I'm glad you can enjoy it without knowing what that means...I thought I ...

hehe. I look forward to it too. Well, Bayer was Paco's probation officer, I think I said that. And he knows Reiko for other reasons. These are the only known ...

*If you haven't read the first part, you don't have to, but it's a whole heck of a lot shorter. Thank you for reading and those who read the last ...

Hm....It's always lighter...you can't even see the detail on the lower fins...I'll have to fix that...

I liked the idea, but all I saw was a blur of color as the story rushed by me. lol. Maybe, slow it down a little? Add to the suspense? ...

haha. I don't really know what Paco means; I only know it's a hispanic nickname for Francisco. lol. :D If it does mean "big fish," I'll probably change that. heh. ...

Character: dog washer Setting: riding a sea horse Action: telling bad jokes aha. aha. I love it! Story theme, totally!

Yes, actually, they would. The point of the arena is to put the students in as a realistic battle as possible. But thank you very much for pointing that out. ...

I can see how attack can be a survival mechanism, but it does make me suspicious that he's attacking more than he's defending. Everyone attacks, I'm not against it. It's ...

I greatly enjoyed them too. I got an extensive new vocabulary from reading that book. heh. They were well writeen and had a great flow. Of course, there were the ...

Omg, I didn't realize i didn't do that! :shock: head/desk *changes that little thing :D* Also, there will be swearing later on. I try to avoid that as much as ...

Part III I groaned and turned my head, but that seemed to be the only thing that obeyed me. My eyes wouldn’t even open, I felt so weighed down. There ...

If you've been to a public high school, you know how scary those kids can be. But how many of you have been to a public high school on the ...

I like it very much! Reminds me of the short little excerpts that you find at the beinning of Twilght (et al). I love those...lol. I don't see anything wrong ...

I very much enjoyed the idea. A weapon/armorpiece that seemed alive...very interesting! I like it! King Iongo knelt down to the grubby stone floor and desperately begged Teslarhi to spare ...