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Re: The Black Plague
Garin Garin leaned against the rail, staring out over the sea. It was nice being away from land, but he did miss the birds. No birds out here, and he'd ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 4 Of Pepita Borrico
Hm. I remember somewhere you wrote "should of," but I can't find it....well, it ain't should of, it's should HAVE!!! HAVE HAVE HAVE HAVE!!! lol. I made that mistake a ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 3 of Pepita Borrico
[quote:]iEs me! In English, "It's me!"[/quote] The i as an upside-down ! only works with different fonts. it doesn't work with this font. I suggest you either change the story ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 2 of Pepita Borrico
Really cool! Now she has a friend, Yay!! *claps* One thing, though: I was overfilled with joy! ahaha, I don't think overfilled is the right word. You can use "overwhelmed" ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague DT
haha quick thought, what if she was blind? But she saw in different ways, like...I don't know...um...maybe she's so in tune with the sea, she knows it so well, that ...
Mar 26, 2008 -
Re: Chapter 1 of Pepita Borrico
I agree with the others. Please, space, mate. If I go blind, I blame you. haha. I would like more pathos. She seems too lassez-faire about her mom dying and ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague DT
ahaha nice song, Luna, mate. heh. Wow. :D Now it'll be stuck in my head all day long...>.< lol
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague
Garin smiled as his bare feet touched the rough deck. He didn't know very many sea-faring shanties, but the few he knew were, in his mind, terribly disturbing; songs of ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague DT
ahaha...most of the time my post starts with the name of my character, but it's part of the that okay? lol.
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague DT
Oh. Okay, then. Garin's age has been changed.
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague DT
Do I have to submit a profile for quartermaster, like we did for captain, or can I just claim it and post my profile in the SB? (Obviously, scrawny li'l ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague
*yeah, I noticed that mistake later...rats. Cabin boy would've been fun. lol. I guess I'll just be a normal AB (Able-Bodied seaman), then.* Garin quickly scaled the mizzenmast, the heavy ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: The Black Plague
*I'm trying for a cabin that okay?* Name: Garin Gender: male Age: 16 Appearance: Not much. A lot of people forget he's there. -Build: slight -Eyes: blue -Hair: limp and ...
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: Writing from the POV of the opposite gender?
the POV of your opposite gender? Dangerous business, mate. Many a good book has been ruined by the fact that the author can't pull off a character of the opposite ...
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: Earn Rice (and improve your vocab!)
Haha I got addictec back in seventh grade. I've gotten up to level 45 without a dictionary! We should have a contest! XD We'd donate so much rice!
Mar 23, 2008
