~Volant~

Garin Garin didn't know how to react. His companion was on the ground, giggling hysterically like a child. He knelt down and shook him hard. "Dierik! Get ahold of yourself! ...

I don't know how to react....haha. I'll try and add right now, though.

You could encounter some of those sprights..... Um, Prowl? What's wrong with Dierek? I don't know how to react.....haha. Should Garin be affected too? Or is it just touching the ...

Garin Garin glanced back in the general direction that Dierik's voice had come from. "Did something just hit you?" Dierik grunted, "No." "You sure? I would've sworn I heard--" "Just ...

Garin "Well," Garin said, looking down the dark tunnel. "There's only one place to go. Anyone have a torch?" *sorry... short...>.

That could work real well, Maybe. We can stumble into the hut and say, "Hey, cool, she's not here. Let's take the maps and run before she realizes they're gone," ...

(For those of you who haven't read the other chapters, here's and overview: Los Malos, an L.A. gang, beats up a kid, gets two new-comers named Connie and Mike, and ...

the tunnel just an aclove, or does it actually go somewhere? I'm confused.

Haha. I liked it very, very much!! Good start! …in a dark black trenchcoat … Dark black? As opposed to light black? That didn’t make sense to me and it ...

I liked this!! I liked this very much! It seemed a little rushed, but it's a good beginning. “Daddy, please wake up.!” “It’s me Adeline. The game’s over daddy. It’s ...

*bwah! No! This cannot die!! Not yet!* Garin Garin started forward, then cursed as the stones blocked the tunnel. He stumbled backwards against the wall to avoid getting crushed, fell, ...

Sermonic TEW the first letter must be first, the last letter must be last, and they must not touch.

Pat Buchanan!!! He is the ULTIMATE rating!! Nothing higher than that ol' bloke!

PUC The letters must not be in the order of appearence Cup The U is still in the same place....haha Are there any letters to go with that rule, Mizz? ...

Why would you push Garin?! He's wounded!!! haha. I like the idea though. We have a tunnel already, but maybe we can use that somewhere else......haha.