~Volant~

Gray Scene II (It’s morning. Mute is up, tossing his rock from hand to hand, thinking. Sage is asleep. Blaine wasn’t able to sleep last night, and he’s very tired ...

Warning; I'm not usually a very nice reviewer...haha. I'm also a major grammar nazi. Just thought I'd warn you. Anyway: I wasn’t borne in the city; I drew my first ...

Haha thank you very, very much. That helped a lot. Like, you have no idea how much that helped. But Sage isn't stupid....he's educated...Dangit. -.- I'll see what I can ...

haha I'm pretty new at scripts, so bear with me. Hope I can help. Great idea. I like the concept and enjoyed this very much I just didn't see any ...

omg fantasy lover!!!!! I can't wait to read your work! I'm a fantasy lover, too. I write as many genres I can, but I really love to write fantasy, even ...

(This is my first play ever written, and needs a lot of help. If you review, please be blunt about it and tell me what's wrong so I can fix ...

meh. To me it's not that big of a deal. They're clean adds, anyway, and I've found several contests and such through google adds. They don't pop out in the ...

Some small, sensible part of his mind was telling Dent that he had gone too far and should probably back off now, preferably feeling something like guilt, but Dent angrily ...

Haha interesting. I like the idea, too! You're giving way too much away in the prologue, though...lol. Perhaps we should learn who these people are later? It hasn't even been ...

Wow....this was really good. I agree with Sam; tell us a little bit more where she is. I didn't even realize this was WWII until Sam mentioned it. There is ...

Dent felt his anger boiling to the surface...he'd hate himself forever for this, but he didn't care. Nothing mattered. He grabbed Rogue by the shoulders, tore her away from Jewel ...

(For those of you who haven't read the other chapters, here's and overview: Los Malos, an L.A. gang, beats up a kid, gets two new-comers named Connie and Mike, and ...

Dent closed his eyes and looked away, trying to hide tears. He called her hysterical and in shock.... He shook his head. "We can't bring her back to life, and ...

Not quite sure what to think of it. It's not what I expected. It's really well written, and I'll have to think about this story for a while....well done, mate, ...

Yikes! Mate, do you realize how fricken long this is? Haha. Break it down into parts; you’ll get more reviews. First off, I’ve noticed you don’t like commas all that ...