~Excalibur~

Twas my thoughts exactly Icarrus. Though this is an improvement of sorts... At first I thought this was something about the freelance writing scam ads on YWS. Though I guess ...

Blink, designer babies were the first thought of genetic engineering. And it is possible with banned research already conducted... Cade, sounds like Brave New World in a way. You might ...

To you realize that the wonder of the fulcrum and its use is still a highly advanced weapon for the location and time? This is the KEY universal weapon which ...

Only problem with that is the steady rise did not happen, it was an explosion of information. We see language, invention, art and functional society emerge all at ONCE. Prior ...

Removal of genetic diseases only. Even that may be too far for some.

Line by line review. ------- Sweat glistens on your porcelain - Does not make sense. crystallising in the chill, you are the ice queen, - Poor word choice, fresh line ...

First letter down is obvious. That doesn't make it a poem though. Why butcher the meter for it? I really don't see the point. If it sounds bad, it is ...

Study politics. There is no reason a blacksmith would rise to general. War is also not cliche, but war without reason is. Politics first, because war is a losing option.

Why was the gene for language just 35,000 years ago? Prior to that humans did not have it, the development of language was one precusor to humans overtaking the earth. ...

It is seen in our soldiers to be HIGHLY effective. The American FPS Gamer, or basically anyone who has grown up with violence is a killing machine when it comes ...

---------- rough waters under my boat never stop thought I could handle rough waters. out of my boat now under my boat now gasping for aid hang on Waisting river ...

Mayans had end of an era, not the world. We are currently in either the fifth age, or the sixth world. If you want to consider age, then the fifth ...

Shooting games seem responsible for less gun crimes per capita. While no shooting game is in the hands of every person, no gun is either. As violent games sell more, ...

I see that I should have read the prologue. I did do so after realizing it. ~_~ Yeah you also have posted quite a bit here in the Fantasy Fiction ...

I don't care for either. I will probably not read a work if the plot summary is cliche. Cliched characters make me put the work down a bit less then ...