~Excalibur~

Note: As much as I hate putting up another piece of work when chapter 1 has no reviews, I am hoping that those who have read it are pondering their ...

Terribly sorry, I forgot to update it! So now I have made a lot of changes, taken out repetitiveness and started the story later then expected. The back story hasn't ...

Author's note: The title may have changed from 'In the Name of...' to 'Gaea', but don't be confused. 'In the Name of..' is the first part of the story, detailing ...

Just pick a story you like and work on it, doesn't matter which. Try to finish one before you start on another. This story does have potential, but it will ...

Light and fluffy, huggy. I'm glad you did not get to the second part, which doesn't exist to the likes of me. Problem with it, Light is not that way. ...

Anna Karenina by Tolstoy. If you can handle a thousand pages, this masterpiece may just change your life.

Most of the other points have already been done to death, but I might as well try to put a new suggestion in. Names. The names seem a bit unusual. ...

1. The story writes itself. Do not plan out every aspect, detail and direction. It will make it predictable and boring. 2. Write or the story will die. 3. Be ...

Don't forget that even Kings were subject to religious law for many ages. If the Kings disobeyed the power of the church and its ways they tend to lose favor, ...

You do a lot of telling and not showing. You should try to fix up as much of this as possible so that the reader doesn't feel like they are ...

Definitely too wordy in descriptions, but the whole 'purple prose' issue is not entirely do to word choice, but rather flow. Using metaphors to describe something is a really good ...

Thanks everyone. I'll definitely get around to reworking it. I do have repetition and that's not good. I wasn't going all epic poem style, but it does read rather dramatically ...

What I was going for and what you read come out pretty different based on your assumptions of time-flow and interpretation of the hints, multi-layered in some spots. Whenever two ...

Author's note: Like it? Hate it? Review it! Edit: New version up. Did some heavy reworking. Edit2: Please review my posted chapters! This will be revisited later on when more ...

I took a look at your previous post to try and get a feel for this, but it just doesn't even try to captivate the reader. All the key details ...