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Re: Gaea - Chapter 5
Note: This piece is probably the last that I will put up as PG-13 as it starts to pick up the speed and maturity level in the next chapters. Nevertheless ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Naruto
(From what I grasp the Hidden Leaf was attacked so yes all people are to report to the Hokage. It would be best if Amon took the lead and gave ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Naruto
(Its the most powerful of all the ninja villages, that attack may hurt player characters, but what about the dozens of Genin, Chuunin and other Jounin. Sure you lost twenty, ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Naruto
(Hope no one minds my guys jumping in.) Kokuga. Yori, Koka Koga Group Positioned Somewhere on the Outskirts of the Hidden Leaf. An old master with two males lurk on ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Naruto
Hope I did this right. It seems fun. I think I am the first Genjutsu based player. o.o! Character Kokuga Koga Name: Kokuga Koga Gender: Male Village: Kumogakure Rank: Unknown ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: I need help from girls aged 14-17
Since this is the research topic, I'll just contribute some sources. Your local schools should have an online program which you can see exactly what classes are offered to students. ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 4
Note: Slightly longer then usual, but I just had to make it so. Finally we witness some of the power that Aphonia has and what she really is. Wentz gets ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: A Necessary Question...
Boo hoo, a terrorist. Chances are you are going to take more flak from being too simple or naive of actual intentions from people rather then be scolded for writing ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Musical Influences
Unsung War from Ace Combat 5. IA-Style Toho - Judgement Days/Lunatic Nightwish - Fantasmic, Beauty of the Beast, Kinslayer Then Sabaton, Rhapsody, Dragonforce and you got my picks Music drowns ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: monodeamon 3
I am a bit confused. This is your third edit? Usually people post one chapter at a time, but you didn't seem to do that. As the work gets longer ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Authonomy
Too easy to set up little circles and it doesn't seem to work as intended. Browsed around some and have gotten a general air that it would be nice for ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Gaea and Frux- Progress Thread
I've lost so much sleep, screwed up my sleep hours and apparently I have started to lose weight since I began turning the countless scraps of paper, pieces and folders ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Undiscovered
Modern approach, pretty smooth transitions. Nice, nice. Though your use of adjectives creates some awkward points as mentioned by Pippie. This piece is hard to review because it is so ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: a cruel reality
Alright. Sorry to gravedig here, but I was asked to review this in exchange for Foxfire taking a look at my unposted pieces of my own work. I'll do this ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: Gaea - Chapter 3
Author's note: No reviews on 2 yet, and only 1 on chapter one. Got tired of waiting so I am posting this one now. I have finished all the way ...
Feb 2, 2009
