~Excalibur~

I really have to disagree with this one. You are giving your own character the power of god when you are already the ST. Clearly ignoring that Akatsuki took the ...

Quick question. Why is Kyuubi in your genin? Akatsuki has Kyuubi I thought. How'd it get into the boy? Even more so, why are all you jounin class ninja using ...

I've striked the Nagi/Bo which is more the Hidden Cloud style anyways. Only Sarutobi was the last effective user in Leaf with one. Archery removed just cause it won't be ...

Umm I forgot to edit the age down to 13, but you are wrong in stating my character is too powerful. All ninja usually know one B rank skill and ...

Rewritten for storybook. Name - Koka Koga Gender - Male Village - Leaf Rank - Genin Age - 13 Appearance - Buff and proud of it, Koka prides him on ...

Wait. Why no jounin? Do we all have to be from the hidden leaf now? And hurray for toting the dead as alive.

1. Grade systems? What grade are you and how old are you when you're in the "Seniors"\ Been answered already. 2. Schedule system? Do you have the choice to pick ...

*cues up Attero Dominatus by Sabaton... yay Stalin is hero of story! Wait... that's bad...* *cues up Legend of Galactic Heroes... SEIG KAISER REINHARD! SIEG KAISER REINHARD* Yeah... well... that's ...

Simple line by line review here: --------- For all the ordeals of character that might arise, There is not much more telling than the threat of demise ('the threat' doesn't ...

(Good note on the Bunshin there. Pretty handy site. *saved to favorites*)

Oh ya this seems REAL legit. "¨ The first edition will receive wide publicity all over the region as there will be an exclusive event launch with the presence of ...

(Edited out: In hindsight, it probably isn't in anyone's best interest to watch 40 hours of naruto fansubs. If you haven't done it yet, then you probably won't start now.)

(I'll use Kokuga if I must pick only one.)

Your prologue is better then mine, but I hope I can review it well enough for you! Doing paragraph by paragraph in brackets. Onto review. ~Prologue~ Once a great many ...

(Amon, we should have a roll-call and get those who want to continue in this. That way it will be less confusing and it can hopefully go on. Count my ...