~Excalibur~

Gaea 1-8 is up and only Amon has reviewed it so far. Prologue the total failure it is does not need reviewing. Parts 1-8 It'd be great if you could ...

Koka pulled his sword out and charged at Sarjen with full speed, using Heaven's Torment to blind everyone as he prepared to strike. Sarjen grabbed the end of his sword ...

Been continuing work on the story at a quick pace. I just added Chapter 8 to YWS which is the most mature and dark of all the chapters so far. ...

Note: MATURE READERS ONLY. Read at your own discretion. Some pretty heavy content in this piece. Lots of cursing and a pretty graphic sex scene. I've become happy with this ...

Experience proved invaluable. Even as Koka blinded Sarjen it was not enough. With one powerful strike the man's chakra enhanced knuckles slammed into the naginata and he grabbed hold of ...

Note: This bit continues to get more serious. Next chapter is far more adult. For anyone reviewing this, please make any suggestions about the imagery if you can. I really ...

Sarjen seemed pleased that they had found him together and as they thought he asked, "Came unprepared? Well... that makes this fun." Genjutsu wasn't his style, but as he quickly ...

(Bolt, the reason why I made the comment was because Koka said he'd die of embarrassment if he was caught doing Yoga. He just liked watching her stretch and contort ...

(Seems my name changed and we've been moved? Koka (not Kota) doesn't do Yoga and he's been up in the tree. If he was moved this happens at the appropriate ...

Hi, I'm Excalibur and I'll be do this paragraph by paragraph! -------- I opened my eyes, and the pain drowned out the sounds. I wanted to scream and get up ...

Note: New characters, new setting! If you haven't read chapters 1-5 then this is a chance to review brand new material. It gets darker here and far more mature for ...

Thanks for the review. Sorry that I don't have much to tear into. Soft is an unnecessary adjective, I'll strip it from the hardcopy for the next edit post. I ...

Koka watched Suika doing some yoga and feigned interest, closing his book in hopes of curing the boredom, "Nervous? Does doing that stuff actually help you calm down, Suika?" He ...

Amon, I'm not sure but that's what I got from 434 with Deva announcing it... I wouldn't doubt that Naruto ends up dying to end the story. Just like Inuyasha's ...

Koka headed towards the training field and arrived some time after Suika. He wore a heavy black shirt and green cargo pants. Attached to his waist was his sheathe and ...