~Excalibur~

Koka walked down the street with Sarjen at his back, the man was complaining loudly, "That is your idea of fun? Not women, not jokes, not games, but PAINTING. You ...

It really depends on the scene. Short list which I go by. Tell: Actions of small value or 'uneventful' situations. Hard to follow moods The past Show Character development pieces ...

Have any of you three actually finished a book? That tried and true method is usually standard issue, but for those who have trouble writing a book the best bet ...

A neutral name is just a neutral name, if you want it to sound strong just have heavy ascent on words and less vowels. Germanic and norse are probably your ...

I have like three thousand better ones in my 'rofl' folder. My favorite ones are the insane writing papers turned into teachers, with the corrections on them and finding the ...

Note: Borderline R since Hilga swore and a little bit of violence. I am not too happy with Amar and Kelric's performance in this piece, they seemed so much more ...

Anthropomorphic penguins! Oh my! Yay for originality, but the dialogue was cliche and so awkward I thought I was watching an episode of Dora the Explorer or something akin to ...

Note: It's not historical, it's not fantasy so I am sticking it here. It is supposed to read like a history book, and in a great narrated way. And lastly, ...

Thanks. I'm going to take a short break from writing chapters to do some research on development to prepare for beefing up descriptions and fixing the flow for the edit.

This is actually worse then the old one. A lot just seems to be copy and pasted without attention to the points made in the reviews. On to the paragraph ...

Still you should have just edited the top instead of bumping it. Could have saved me 10 minutes of reading an outdated variant. That or could you please have just ...

Note: This was modified after I was unhappy with the change of POV, so while this takes place at 11:30ish in the timeline, the scene with the three kings and ...

(my group please post your preparations.)

Note: This piece really needs to be read straight through with chapter 10 and 11, but that is too much for YWS. Rated R for language and violence. ------------- Chapter ...

(I am highly opposed to the switching of teams just because you feel like it. A team is a team, it does not matter the balance and acting on just ...