~Excalibur~

Good points, I see Firestarter's 'Winning the Battle' is here, from which Hippie used for his writing. The only problem I see with these essays is that they are broad ...

Does YWS even have a forum for Instructor based writing classes? Its the first time I've heard about it, but a search failed me. Sometimes I think that people generally ...

Author's note: Probably only rated PG-13 at best, but a rather emotional scene. The ambition of Raina is amazing and her foresight proves she will be a valuable queen. Though ...

Sorry, but you need to access the writing tab, and not the community tab for this site. Writer's corner is simply to describe your work and its content, not the ...

Thanks and let's see if I can more to your point, as I am learning as you tell me here. On the matter of prisoners being made into slaves, yes ...

Using proper name choices is good, but don't forget to have lowly names be in there as well. One of my characters is named 'Cliff' and another is simply 'Red'. ...

Just use openoffice, its free and it doesn't give you hassle like word. :/ Works better then word 2007 anyways. That failed piece of junk is about as useful as ...

Hi Pippie, I have 14 chapters of my work which you could review if you got bored. Should keep you busy for some time! Gaea is rated R for a ...

How's it going Krupp? Surely you are not that busy? You could probably do 1000 words a day at least. Currently I am on a streak as I am filling ...

Author's Note: First part we see Kilirae prior to his regular scheduled appearance four chapters late. Cein and his discussion will all be key points later, and more importantly the ...

Short enough for me to rip apart... Sorry, but this may be harsh. Kyrstin stood against the firm brick wall. The sun rained down on her as she waited for ...

Straight from the wiki: "As the battle was fought on a recently ploughed field, and there had recently been heavy rain leaving it very muddy, it proved very tiring to ...

Harsh.. Okay. Let's see what I can do. "You see, I’m a huge nerd, and I love to read fantasy novels, well I used to, but we can get to ...

Author's note: Lots of history and lots of description. Since this is my first real historical info dump I tried to make it entertaining and put in some of my ...

I'll help.