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Question--does it have anything to do with what I think it does? Comments--I loved it!!! It had a nice flow to it. And no, I'm not just saying that because ...

I don't know if it's just me because I'm weird or what it was, but I liked the entire thing. It reminded me of how many of my characters are ...

No, no, you were actually very clear! Thank you! I'm not surprised (or upset) that I received so much criticism for this particular part of The Arms Dealer, just because ...

I've been trying to find the beginning of this for the past hour, but I've found only bits and pieces that are NOT the beginning. When I find it, I'll ...

I pretty much wrote this on a whim, so it may not be exactly word-for-word historically correct. My friend critiqued it, but that was literally pages ago--these are pages one ...

Other than a few things that could be found and changed with a little proof-read, it was perfect. I loved the imagery--I saw pictures instead of seeing word after word. ...

I agree--long paragraphs make everything terribly hard to read and I got lost once or twice. With spacing, that wouldn't have been an issue. It seemed just a tad rushed ...

Ooh, I liked it. Now, I happened upon this chapter and realized, with embarrassment, that this is the third installment. I'll take the time to read the others either tonight ...

Hehe, the nb stands for her name. ^^ Er, first and last, I mean. I'm the 'awesome friend Ashes' she was talking about that wrote "The Arms Dealer". I haven't ...

"A writer only fails when they stop writing". I read that in our Lit. book. It's a quote from Ray Bradbury. I can't stand the things he writes ((haha, sorry)) ...

Normally, my male characters are the attractive--and in some cases, overly-attractive--and my female characters are, for the most part, quite plain and quiet. Only a few of them are very ...

Okay, I'm not so bad after all--there's ALWAYS a conflict between my characters. In one instance, guy meets girl, guy and girl fall in love...guy's brother decides he likes girl ...

Hmm, I'm glad I read this! I always tell my friends, whenever I start a new story, that I'm a sucker for romance. It's just not fun for me to ...

'Ello! I go my many nicknames between all my friends, so I think I'll respond to nearly anything...okay, that's an exaggeration! My friend nicknamed me "Ashes" a while ago, a ...