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Raindrops danced on a quiet breeze... Shouldn't it be "rain drops"? Not "raindrops"? Or you could even hyphenate it. Raindrops danced on a quiet breeze, capturing glimpses of the moonlight; ...

I agree--stanzas would make this easier to read. Also, the end of the poem rhymes but the beginning doesn't. It messed with the flow--the end flowed perfectly, but not along ...

I really liked this poem, both the meaning and the flow. I have the habit of drumming my fingers against things without even knowing it, and I realized that I ...

Short and sweet! I only have a few suggestions to highlight what others said... The beginning in the end don't really match. Unless that song had something to do with ...

1. Do you think that it was a bit corny? Corny? No, it's adorable! I loved it! 2. Was a bit too childish? Childish? No, it was adorably playful! I ...

I'm not going to nitpick--there's nothing to nitpick, actually! There were few words, but it was a beautiful poem. Lovely flow and everything. I saw a lack of descriptive words, ...

That was two things: a good rap AND a good poem! You get extra points from me for that! That was amazing--I found nothing wrong with this poem at all! ...

Yes, I disagree--this poem was perfect the way it is! You don't need to change the rhyming around or anything! It had a nice flow, a nice rhythm, and it ...

Short, sweet, and to the point, BUT, it would be much better if it was longer. You really start to get a feel for a poem and the words are ...

Just like they said... This just isn't poetry--at all! No flow, no rhythm, no life, so passion--no nothing. I suggest you try to space it out, number one, add flow, ...

Awww, that's a sweet poem! It conveyed cutesy romantic feelings AND it had a nice flow and rhythm, which isn't always present in a poem. I just had one nitpick... ...

That was a really nice poem! And it had a flow! I cannot tell you how often I read poetry that has no flow! This poem seemed like wise advise, ...

It has already been said that... a) this wasn't even a poem and that b) you put no effort in this at all And I must agree. It doesn't make ...

Since it doesn't make sense to turn into the Grammar Witch--and what's the point, anyway?--all I have to say is... That was really nice! Everything I wanted to say has ...

It was very nice, but you made a mistake that I see a lot--the words don't match the flow. I got lost in the middle thanks to that. It was ...