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Ahh, I face a dilemna!!! Where (rather, how?) should I start? I wouldn't want to have to redo a post...

Short, sweet, full of emotion--I liked it! I'm trying to discover the hiding meaning, but all I can think about is one time in my writing when my character slits ...

Beautiful and wicked! I was just singing "Wicked" songs a minute ago and this poem reminded me of Elphaba. (But enough about me!) I don't have any nitpicks whatsoever with ...

I think rhyming would have added a nicer flow to it, but it was fine how it is! I loved it! I just have one little nitpick... I showed them ...

So you need a sadistic male vampire? (Basically, a Rogue) I can do that. ^^ I'll wait until I see you've come back until I join, however.

I have really old, historical names that you would have a hard time finding in a phonebook nowadays. Anyone need any of those? A lot of these are common syllables ...

You need recruits, Ayumi? I can be whatever you need--sorry I haven't talked to you more about this in a few weeks, but I'm still interested in joining! What do ...

I loved this poem! It drew me in from the first couple of lines. Flow, rhythm, personification, rhyming, description--I couldn't find anything wrong with this poem! It was refreshing to ...

Dear diary, Dear Diary, "Diary" should be capitalized. Today is Wednesday December 16th 1894. The weather in London has been absolutely freezing and my day has had quite a few ...

Thanks! Wow, no nitpicks so far? That's a record for me! ^^

This is directly after the first part I posted--So if it seems confusing in the beginning...bear with me. I'm still working out the kinks with this one. And I decided ...

I loved this poem--short and sweet! I love rhyming poetry! To me, it doesn't flow right unless the poem either rhymes or twists and turns onward and that gives it ...

Awww, I loved it! I could see a handful of M&Ms as I read this poem! The rhyming added and kept a wonderful flow to this poem--it was nice and ...

Awww, how cute! I love it when I read cutesy, makes-you-smile poetry! It reminds me of an adorable children's book--have you ever considered writing children's books? I think you'd--no, I ...

I feel bad because I'm the only one who, so far, didn't like it... I have a few nitpicks and then on to why I didn't preferably like it. but ...