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Re: Revenant Rising 1.3: Ocean of the Sun
Really good start. I, however, noticed that it looks like you hit the enter button. After you finished a sentence. Instead of continuing the story. Was this on purpose or ...
Dec 29, 2016 -
Re: The Guardians
It is a grate start. But I was wondering were your prolog was ? You also need to work on your capitalization. but good job it looks grate.
Oct 5, 2016 -
Re: Jay
Yes this is my prologue.
Sep 1, 2016 -
Re: Fate
I think this story is grate. i really what to see what comes next. i do think you should describe your charters a little more. and i love
Mar 30, 2016 -
Re: Jay
It is just the beginning
Mar 4, 2016