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Re: The before and after of slapping someone with a wet fish.
It started out serious but then someone gets slapped with a fish...I LOVE IT! Serious then funny. I like the title tool strange and unique! I'm not very good with ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: Hidden (Preview)
Whoa!! Was not expecting that! I love how you described the little girl so CUUUTE!! Mean little boy had to push her down :( OOo i want to know what ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: My True Best Friend :')
Very touching story. It reminds me of my first day of kindergarden! I also sat next to my first real friend, but i didnt cry when my mom dropped me ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: The Hurricanes are Beautiful
I absolutely love storied about insane people and voices! Call me weird or morbid but i dont care. this story was amazing. I'll admit that at first i didnt know ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Miss Spoiler
Hahahahahahaha this reminded me of the Dont Press the Button game on my iPod! I laughed so hard!! This is cooooll :D
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: No turning back.
Umm Hi there!! Umm I really dont know what's happening...sorry maybe you could explain that more. :D
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: The little things between us
Okay, i must confess...half way through it.......I almost started crying! You put so much emotion in this that I like I was you!! This was very powerful and emotional! Keep ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
HAHAHAHA NIIIIICE!!! :D
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: all the pretty things
Nice message! I loved how you didnt use to much imagery because this gives the reader the opportunity to image on their own. Like, I imaged a standard yellow butterfly ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Im Too Young For Love
This is a first chapter?? Its good as an opening but I wouldn't use its as a chapter...maybe like a prologue?? I liked it!! By the way it's 'I WILL ...
Aug 21, 2011 -
Re: The Suicide
I'm not big on correcting because English isnt my best subject, but shouldnt it be 'You too son'?? I dont know really, but over all a realllly gooood story! :D
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: the bad guy
I know excatly what you mean, to feel like its your fault that your parents seprated and the amount of pain you bare. But, hey, I guess we'll get over ...
Aug 19, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
Haha this was My story!! Smartass and In Your Face! Take that moon!! Bahaha LOVED IT! Interesting, very interesting! Keep up the good work!
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
Omg...This is totally flipping AWESOME!! You Used Awesome in almost every sentence and still made it sound cool!! At first I thought this was going to be a I-Feel-Like-Writing-Something-But-I-Really-D
Aug 18, 2011 -
Re: You ( The inside of you
Very emotional!! LOVED IT!! But there were a few mistakes :( But fix those and keep on trucking on :)
Aug 18, 2011