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This a very nice story! A bit confusing at times but it had a good point to it. Liked it a lot!

Ahh, depressing yet beautiful... Just the way I like them :P Its hard to describe the way I want to describe your story so I'm just going to say I ...

I loved this peom and it even sounds better while listening to a Fall Out Boy song :/ Haha I loved how it wasnt long and it got the point ...

Nappy - Nasty Ex: You are so nappy! Grody - disguting Ex: Eww, that's grody! Jank - jacked up/screwed up Ex: This class is jank! Nakum - Napkin Ex: Can ...

Ohhh this a novel?? This is really good, very good imagination. I didnt find any major mistakes or minor for that matter. I loved it and I would like to ...

Wow...I actually felt like I was running and about to have a heart attack. :D Very nice, and detailed. I liked how you said : your legs can no longer ...

I love it! But i think football for girls is called something like powder puff or puff ball, something along those lines. Is this a novel?? I really wanna know ...

Yes there are ALOT of errors. Punctuation, new paragraphs, civilization; all needs to be looked at. I saw that the limo driver's name was Don but then changed to Dan. ...

I have never liked a story with too much detail because then you leave the reader feeling bored because you used half a chapter describing a fence post or somthing. ...

I DISLIKE YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY!!! :'( Jk Jk :D This a very powerful story with alot of suspense packed into such a short story. Very nice but....I WANT ...

LOVE.THIS.POEM. That's all there is to say. I liked how you put To the boy in the library, And the girl with the piercing, I dont know but it made ...

I love the Warrior series!! But...you sound to much like Eric Hunter. Try changing some of the words. For example : instead of "clan" try "tribe" or "Healer" for "medicine ...

OMG!! This soooo weird because I was going to upload a song wrote from a guy's perspective for my book *gasps and covers mouth* 0_o creeeeeepy Lol It was a ...

Awwww :) This is so cute! I wish guys I knew were more like you instead of immature. This is really good! It had a nice rhythm to it, I ...

Am I suppose to laugh?? I think I'm suppose to laugh because this is total smart ass right here! I love it! I didnt find any mistakes sooooo GOOD JOB!