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I don't normally write in first person, but I was advised to write this story that way. I've actually posted this story before but it was not in first person; ...

It's that dude Ranger Hawk is so obsessed with. Cool drawing :)

Hello there :) I know you mentioned that this was written in a 'casual' style, but it shouldn't excuse proper sentencing and paragraphing. The first paragraph is just so congested ...

Hello Rascalover! :) First of all, this was very sad, touching, emotional, etc. After reading it I felt really bad for the MC. Dear baby I will never meet, I ...

Hello there, Subjectblue :) ...and Welcome, welcome to YWS! I'm clutching my head between my hands, the horrible headache denying me of thinking. There seems to be a mix up ...

Count me in! I live in Southern Africa, but I'm not sure yet what I'd write about...

Cammie, thank you for the request! I managed to review Please call again! :)

Hello there Cammie! :) I'm here as requested...let's get crackin', shall we!? “Trixie, what are you doing?” Trixie’s mother’s sweet sing-songy voice echoed in the room. I froze and quickly ...

Hawk, I arrived a little late, but I did leave something :) Please come again...

Hello Hawk! :) Looks like I'm a bit late... You have a lot of great reviews, especially the one from alpha. To avoid any repetition, I'm just going to mention ...

Paperbackheart, done! please come by again :)

Hello there :) I'm here as requested ;) I just want to let you know that this is my first review as a reviewer 2 badge holder, so I hope ...

Tigershark, done! Please call again ;)

Hello there :) I'm here as requested. Melanie Holbrook climbed out of her second floor window and sat down on the cool, black slanted roof beneath her. Every night she ...

Mikko, done! Please come again :)