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I like it. I feel calm and at ease after I read it. Like, I am under a shade or under a tree myself writing the exact same words. I ...

Wooow. It is like I am watching a round of well deserved chick flicks. Wait, that is an understatement; what I mean is, one of those movies set in the ...

...I am speechless. This is great. This is a simple poem but the way it just comes down on you is just too complex for the mind. I am still ...

I was feeling really down when I wrote this poem. I had just had feelings of beats in my heart and decided to 'dance' to my writing. Please enjoy this ...

I would like to agree with Navita in most parts of the poem. The poem is what I expect it to be; which should not be the case. I mean, ...

Good intention is what this poem has. I think it lacks a bit of emotion and does not connect the reader(me :)) as it is supposed to. That is the ...

Untalented? Did you give yourself that name? If you did, it is not being modest; it is a diss, disrespect to what I have just read. This poem is like ...

Interesting.

You are really 13? That is some talent. I think this poem totally descirbes a mother as many people view them, with love. This poem basically makes me want to ...

Wow. My only wish was for the poem not to end. what deep feelings. good description tools too. :)

This is deep. I like the way the poem loses you a bit and then gets you on track at the same time. Good job.

Who will cry for me? I am a bulging pathetic I have a bulging synthetic Hopeless old replic-A Done before, seen before, failed before Can this be more intense? My ...