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I entered this poem into a competition a few years ago and I never even got a reply to regret my entry. What is wrong with it? :D Introduced by ...

Oh wow, it is so cute. At first I thought it was photograph. And the bright colours really complement the picture. The background...now I want to take art class or ...

Hi. I love it, love it! The writing is excellent. The imagery, you go girl! I mean every single line just drew me in, I almost hit my head on ...

Humph! Maybe it is the title. The poem is fine. It is one of those general "why" poems about love. It is well written, the only big problem I have ...

I think I like it. It is special and the way it is written, it sends out different meanings I think all at once; which in sense I think makes ...

Hello I will have to be honest and say that it has potential. If I talk about the story line, well its obvious to me and someone else that, its ...

Hello I absolutely love the chorus; especially the part about time going away and stuff. The lyrics are good. I think you have a gift there. :)

Hello I have never heard the song you referred to but I think you lyrics rock! I love the flow, it's effortless. And they are honest. I think most lyricists ...

Well, it's OK. I will give you that much. But for my preference, although written beautifully, I feel it is too straight forward and simple. Too simple. There is no ...

I wrote this poem when I was feeling insanely intimidated by a group of students in my class a few years ago. My master! From the professors of criticism You, ...

Hello Sarebear This poem actually talks about the feeling you have when you fail at everything or can't seem to get anything right. And then you expect some sympathy or ...

Deep stuff. I think the poem is great. it has this flow of constant emotions that make me picture myself in the situation and in turn sympathize. Besides the spelling, ...

I enjoyed it. it reminds me of the precious moments when I play my guitar but this time under a tree with the wind blowing on my face. I think ...

thank you for the great advice. i will consider that next time

An interesting choice of words in the different ideas presented. I like that about it. The poem was generally good, deep. I will say it again, I liked it. And ...