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Hello Yep, you delivered here girl. This is some great stuff. You did a good job at keeping the poem dark and stormy like I expected which is why I ...

Hello Bravo! Oh my gosh, what a poem. This is so deep and true. I absolutely love it. And I have the exact same feelings right now and they couldn't ...

Hi there I like this, a lot. Wow. Your vocabulary is magnificent, I feel like I am watching a movie when I read this. I can tell you are really ...

Hi there. This will be my first shot at reviewing a short story so here goes :) I will start with what I did not like. So, I get what ...

Hello I think this is a cute poem. It is actually really good. The emotions are true as the words are. I mean these are issues that affect us a ...

Hi there Um, this is different. It sure is deep and I like it. This is a very short and simple piece and I think it's great. The idea behind ...

:D Sweet. That is what I would call it, sweet and short and it demands attention. I felt that this was the right approach for this particular topic, right and ...

Hi there Well, alright before I get to the song, the title is a problem :D ; for me at least. It does not do the wonderful lyrics underneath any ...

Hi there. First of all, what an interesting introduction :D Alright, now for the review. I enjoyed the poem generally. You have executed imagery well. I myself actually feel caged ...

I wrote this poem because I was feeling betrayed by everyone around me (I'm fine now :D ). It basically talks about my idea of a 'home' from those feelings ...

Hello Well, this poem has potential and I sort of liked it. The problems I had was that it was not enough. It's too short. The poem talks about your ...

Hey Um, sorry, but I am kind of lost here. The first line says something else and then we are at trees? :? I really do not understand what is ...

Hello Oh, so there are two poems here? If it is only one poem then I will consider them as two poems because that's what it looks like...and I'll have ...

Hi OK, I know that it is totally irrelevant, but these lyrics are totally cute. They are just effortlessly cute. I think you did a great job here. The words ...

Hello, Humph...well, I spotted some spelling mistakes which is sometimes a turn off. My suggestion would be to read over the poem again. The second problem I have is with ...