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Hello I like it. Yes. I think its different and refreshing and deep. I also did not spot any spelling errors. I especially enjoyed the first paragraph because you were ...

Hi there You are right about the lack of physical art and way to go, taking matters into your own hands.:D The photos are not that clear but I can ...

When these Princes died off, they had their powers striped from them, I think you mean stripped. This should be interesting. Great story line you have here. I think though, ...

Hello I have always been fond of repetition in poetry. I guess it irritates some people but I think that poetry can be expressed in different ways, ways in which ...

Hi there I am sorry but I am not sure if I understand what you are aiming for here. But then again, I feel that there is deep emotion in ...

Hello Well, it is a different way to approach a subject like this. I definitely like the structure of the poem and the flow of your words. They are deep ...

Hello I liked this story a lot really. There were some few spelling mistakes in there though. The one strong suggestion I could give you is that when you write ...

Hey. Well, this was probably the best story I have reviewed today. I love the fact that there is emotion and I can feel it. Even though it is something ...

Hey :) Well, first of all I love the picture. It totally rocks. Your story definitely shows some potential. I felt though that you did not approach your subject well. ...

Hey there. Alright, I will be nice. I thought the poem was great...(and this is not because I am being nice). I feel you are tackling a very sensitive issue ...

Hello :) He through on his jacket and sped out the door. I think you were going for 'threw'. Well, the story line is really nothing special; I have to ...

Hello there This is the first time I actually review a story so I hope I help. I grew up with every girls toddler dream. Don't you mean 'every girl ...

Hello I could not have said it better myself. These are true wise spoken words. I liked the poem. It was simple and to the point. I had a problem ...

Awake my darling, Hear your children crying. They fear pain in your soul, They see vein as you moan, Moan your secret life away. Won’t you kneel and pray? Before ...

Hello It really did not feel like I was reading a poem here. Maybe the beginning of a story perhaps. And I really did not feel any poetic elements. But, ...