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Hello Hmm. What a thought provoking poem. I like your style and what I enjoyed the most was the structure of the poem. It is different from what I see ...

Hello there Well, the third chapter is posted already? I just reviewed the second right now. I have been off 'air' for a while. I think generally my comment will ...

Aww. What a sweet poem. I like it. Hi there Um, this is a sweet poem I have to be honest. The last three stanzas like took me to that ...

Hello I must have missed this when you posted it. Now I had to read chapter one first to try and remember where I was? :D Anyways, this chapter, the ...

Woow Hello there, I am speechless. What a lovely story. And I cannot believe that you are going to make me wait for part two and three, I want to ...

Thank you for your suggestions. I edited the last stanza.

Hi there First of all, I am a huge fan of Phineas and Ferb. Where did you find that adorable avatar? :P Alright back to business. I think the story ...

I'm not sure about the title :smt001 Are we having another fight? The usual every night. Aren’t we sleeping at all To dream Of the stars and what they might? ...

thanks, i'll check them out :)

Hello Maybe this has been pointed out a dozen times before but...getting published is hard :lol: It is HARD! You just never know what they want. I mean I will ...

Hey Is anyone just over the top obsessed with Kasabian's song Underdog like me? I know, it has been months since the song was released but I cannot get enough. ...

Hi there NiteStrike This poem definitely shows some potential. I can feel what you feel :smt001 . But there is something that gets me confused as it progresses, But every ...

Hello This is a great believable poem. It is simple and I like it. I like how you described your actions and your rhyming technique. I try to force sleep ...

Chapter 1 (part1) The rain throbbed hard upon the metal roof. It made a piercing sound that sent a shiver down the spine, although rhythmically pounding like the beat of ...

Hi there Now, is it hot in here or what? I like your poem, it reminds me of my house. You have a gift here. I liked how you were ...