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Hello there “Will right? I think you forgot something in this line, it does not make sense. Just a quick reminder; you tend to use words like 'wasn't' instead of ...

Hello there Well, I like the picture. it's so bright and clear. The summer air, even at night, was a bit to hot for my liking. I think you meant ...

Hello there Um, maybe there's a problem with your computer? :) Anyways, I will be honest and say that I did not feel any emotion in this poem. It was ...

The rain had stopped and sun’s rays were beaming hurriedly through the rusty roof. Birds were melodically chirping welcoming the new wet earth. People came out of their houses to ...

Hello there Now, I think this picture is gorgeous. Now, I don't know what you were going for here exactly, I know you said it is a random shot, but ...

Hello there Well this is a beautiful poem. It is touching or emotional, I love it. The events were actually how I expected them to turn out, which is nothing ...

Hello there Err, well, I think in this case the good ol' traditional stanza format would have done the job. I will be honest but I don't like this whole ...

Hi there This was awesomely sweet and romantic. I like the repeating line because it fits into the mood. I also enjoyed the general flow and your choice of words. ...

Hello there Not bad at all. The photos are so calming and refreshing. I like the sunset better...well, maybe its because I think sunsets are just so phenomenal. You are ...

Hello Well this is my first shot at reviewing a script and I am pretty sure what I have to say will not be of assistance to you. But, I ...

Hey So this is getting interesting. I had the following problems: Everythings so fuzzy I think you should add 'was' in there. Something you should remember, when you quote, leave ...

Hey there I love the quote, it is so wise; I had an 'you're right!' moment. I did not think though that you did the words justice in terms of ...

Hey there I think I have been reviewing your poetry for quite a while now and I think you have a gift of getting away with the short poems. It's ...

Hi there aquareed I thought I would do the honours :) So, you seem to have something good here. The idea is promising, nothing new or different but it can ...

Moses came from a dysfunctional family but also very wealthy as they owned the only garage in the village. Him and his four brothers were trained to fix cars and ...