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  • Other Poetry Re: Walls up

    Hello there I really think that this poem lacked a lot of emotion or good execution. It is a great idea and I totally get what you are going for, ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: The Hunger Games

    Hello there This sketch is really really good. I like them a lot. It's just pure talent. I mean, the shading is excellent, I wish I could shade like that ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Four women

    Hello there I just love these. Your webcam created a classical look in a weird kind of way. I actually thought they were paintings you saw somewhere, but I'm strange ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Only A Dream

    Hello there and welcome I like this poem a lot. I think you did a pretty good job. The ending is just unexpected. Beautiful stuff hey. I really have nothing ...

    May 30, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Song (Chapter 3)

    The sun was setting behind the Ditau hill. Its rays were forcefully peeping out in order to see the phenomenal landscape of the village. It then became very dark really ...

    May 29, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Torn Veil (Part 3 of 3) FINAL PART!

    hello once again Well, hats off to you first of all. I loved the story evidently but I have to say I am little disappointed with the there a part ...

    May 29, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Beautiful Ballerina

    Hello there I thought the flow of the poem was graceful and I liked it. I liked the way you described the feelings and actions during the performance. She has ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Noble King

    Hello there and welcome. To be honest, I really did not understand this poem. I don't know, maybe its because of the lack of punctuation or something else. I battled ...

    May 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: The Bus to Infinity

    Hello there I will be honest, I was not very fond of this poem. It...lacked something, some adventure. I was seriously expecting a bus to infinity and I got a ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Mr.Weed.

    :lol: The last line pretty much sealed the deal. Well, hello there Nova. I liked this poem very much. It was witty and quick and very true. I am not ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Every Day and Night

    Hello there Kingolions I loved this poem, wow. It is something different, it is refreshing. I just like the transition from day to night over and over. I mean at ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: A B C...

    Hello there Romeyo I love the whole arrangement first of all. It is really creative. I quite enjoyed your piece. I found absolutely nothing wrong with it when I was ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Irony

    Hello there and welcome! So, I noticed that you were able to put a lot of emotion in there and I actually liked this poem a lot. But I agree ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: too small to notice.

    Hello there darkangel Even though the picture is not good quality, I love the photo. Plus the flower is purple, and I love anything purple. Anyways, I like the angle ...

    May 27, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Torn Veil (Part 2 of 3)

    Hello there Look, I don't care how long part three is, I want to finish the story :P I really think that you have a gift of describing situations eloquently. ...

    May 27, 2010


Revision is one of the exquisite pleasures of writing.
— Bernard Malamud