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Found this one in my archives... You caught me! I’m thinking again. Go ahead, prosecute my emotions. It's this brain that won’t give it a rest! My silent friend that ...

Hello there Wow, I think I am seeing some pretty good love poetry today. I enjoyed this a lot. You did a pretty good job. I liked your use of ...

Hey there ladyworks This was interesting. Some deep stuff. I can see you had a lot on your mind and a lot to say. I liked it very much, the ...

Hello there Wow, this is really good. I enjoyed it very much. I hope you know that I can’t stand That you don’t notice me That he said I was ...

Hello there Well, I actually loved this piece. I felt the emotion just fine. The meaning or your expression is deep and this is good if you want to convince ...

Deep, deep in the heavens, A lot of commotion As white blue sadness gathers; Swishing and swirling In preparation for fall. Then a signal By a raucous flash; and presto! ...

Hello there I really do not feel this poem. It feels like a bunch of words thrown at me and so I don't feel any flow or connection. Perhaps it ...

Hello there Well I liked the poem; the idea in general. But to be honest I did not like the execution that much, I felt it was just fine and ...

Hello there I will be honest, I did not like it that much. It was just fine. I thought that the first too stanzas were just amazing but then after ...

Hello there Wow, you have got some mad skills there. It's just so clear and beautiful. I happen to be fond of how the outside looks after the rainfall myself ...

Hello there This was a great poem and I quite enjoyed it. It was deep and the level of emotion was just right. I also like how you ended it. ...

Hey there originalhobbit I liked this poem. But I think something is missing. I don't know, maybe you skipped a little connection somewhere in there. Maybe it's because the emotion ...

Hello there You will forgive me but I did not understand some parts of the poem, but let me break it down. The birds, silhouettes spreading their wings, take flight ...

Hello there Well, to be honest, I am not sure if I understand the poem that well, or maybe what I grasped from it is not what you were going ...

Hello there Right. I hope I don't sound mean but this is a disaster. Some parts of your poem did not seem like a poem but something else. I will ...