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Hello there Well, you know me, I am a fan of your stories and thus I've nothing to complain about on this one. I saw no spelling mistakes and no ...

Hello there This is a thought provoking poem indeed and I liked it...how it leaves me in a world of thought. This is true and creative :) The last three ...

Hello there :) Well, this was a little off for me. Firstly, I think you should try and separate your paragraphs first. And now we get into the story. I ...

Hello there I will start off with outlining the mistakes I spotted There was nowhere left to turn, she was surround by his lightening speed I think you meant "surrounded". ...

Hey there. Thanks for the reviews and yeah, it's most definitely African. :)

I know, I wish I lived in the '70s too. Great song choice!

Hello there This is a dark poem. But I like it because it is emotional and I can feel the emotion. I think you did a good job with your ...

Her room was properly furnished with a huge bed with a wooden base, pictures and drawings of the tribes’ totem. Everything in her room was elegant and over the top, ...

Hello there Well, this is basically what I like to call a deep poem! And I liked it. There were some parts though which I did not get when I ...

Hey there I have no problem with posting little explanations of the poem. There is no rule against it. But next time don't do it because I think it's fun ...

Hello there I had a problem with the lack of punctuation in your poem. I don't know, it made some parts very confusing and I had to read over and ...

Hello there tinkerfee and welcome to YWS Cool avatar. Anyways, you have something promising going on here. I think that your writing has a lot of potential. There are just ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS I love this poem. I nearly gave you a standing ovation but I am not in the right place to do that. I loved ...

Hey there and welcome to YWS First of all, love your avatar. Anyways, your avatar is not the only thing I liked, you are a great storyteller. I loved your ...

Hey there, I once read that we have more than 25 dreams every night and that we only remember those that affected us most mentally. Sometimes you don't remember having ...