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Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) There are a lot of spelling and punctuation errors in this piece, but looks like Pritt has taken care of everything so there ...

Hello there There was a lot going on in my head as I read this. I even held my throat a couple of times. Good job on this one. I ...

Hello there You are crazy, this is really good. I can see Jeepers Creepers (a classic ;) ) had a huge impact on you. I loved the beat to this ...

Hello there :) I thought I would do the honors. Well, as I was reading this it did not strike me as a poem as such but a story line ...

Hi there Alright, I liked it. Boy, you have got a lot say here and I heard it. Just watch out for a few punctuation errors like not capitalizing "I" ...

...Alright, I will admit, I love my food a little too much :wink: I had a hard time with the last line, a little help please. Banana, ice cream and ...

Hello there Hey I actaully thought that this was not bad. The first stanza really drew in my attention, the way it flowed with all the comments and compliments etc. ...

Hello there I think that a lot has been said before me. I liked the poem and the consistent rhyming which was not annoying. I also think that you executed ...

Hello there And so I long for nightfall, when darkness covers our faces, it hides the scars of worry that the world has cut into your brow, and the sleepless ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS Wow, this was lovely, just lovely. I thought that you did a really good job with the imagery and I could really feel the ...

Hello there I will have to disagree with the comments above. I actually thought that this was pretty good. There was a lot of good imagery, I liked how you ...

I really could not think of a title. She had rehearsed the same chorus over and over in her head for over two days now. Her secret had to come ...

Hello there I will start by first outlining some of the mistakes It wasn't fair. was not . Only use "wasn't" when quoting a character. You seem to have done ...

I absolutely hate any product of disney- Miley Cyrus, Jonas Brothers, Demi Lovato etc. I also don't like: -Taylor Swift (honestly, I don't get why she's so famous) -Nickelback -Panic ...

Hello there :D This was...interesting. I did not like it that much. Maybe it's because I did not grab the message. As I read the poem, I could not draw ...