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Hello there :) I thought that I'd do the honours Sometimes Joslyn hated being Scarlett’s chauffer, but when it was to go to Thayer McMains house , she didn’t mind. ...

Hey there Could you please review my chapter I'm stuck, well you'll see why from the intoduction I posted. The post is a little old but I'm really desperate. Thank ...

Thank you so much for the great reviews, this was really helpful :)

Hello there :) form the ones I love. I think you meant 'From' So this was a very deep poem, the words are intense. But I could not pick up ...

Hello there FireandIce :) I have to commend you, this was a very creative idea. Eventhough, and I will be honest, the words and the meaning are just plain and ...

Hello there :) I thought I would do the honours. I don't think that there is ever anything to correct in someone else's lyric because whatever you write goes along ...

I never thought that the day would come; that day where I felt older than I already was. I watched my mother frantically loading the car with all of our ...

Hello there :) Hope you are well. So, I think your writing in this entry has improved from the last because now you are explaining a lot more and connecting ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I am not going to complain about anything! This was fantastic. First of all, good work on the first introductory part. I just ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Hope you are enjoying yourself already. I will have to be honest here, this does not really strike me as a chapter because ...

Hello there :) I thought I would do the honours. Firslty, next time you post your writings, try to separate everything accordingly so that it makes it easier to read ...

Hello there :) I thought I'd do the honours. I liked this a lot. I like your writing style. The problem I had with this is that you tend to ...

Hello there :) This was very long so I managed to read some of it. From the bit that I read, there were some spelling errors but they were not ...

Hello there :) Interesting topic. I thought that this poem lacked a lot of emotion, if it's not emotion then it's that spark to make it original. I think this ...

Hello there :) Wow, I loved this. I felt the pouncing of "power" in every sentence. I have nothing to correct so I'll just comment. I agree, some people if ...