ziggiefred

Hello there Jane :) I stopped at Fast Mart and got a bag of M&Ms, then hid behind a couple of trees and cried for a few minutes. Your main ...

Hello there and since you are relatively new, welcome to YWS! :) The previous reviewer pretty much said what I wanted to say, well some of the things. This was ...

Hello there :) I just like your writing style, it's good. Firstly though, I think that next time before you submit something make sure your work is spaced because everything ...

Hello there Jane. :) I must have missed this when you submitted it. I liked the subtlety of the story, the way you set the mood was very calming. I ...

Hello there :) Wow, this is very well written. I like your writing style, it makes events very vivid because you describe them well. You also had a great story ...

Hello there Horseradishcares :) This was an interesting poem, full of emotion, I enjoyed it a lot. Although sometimesI thought you were going in circles, especially in this stanza I ...

Hello there :) Yuriiko has already given you quite a review, so I'll just give a quick comment. I think the way you tell your story is very informal. It ...

Hello there :) Sodapop already gave you a great review so I'll try my best. This paragraph is just too big, I noticed this trend of gigantic paragraphs through out ...

Hello there :) Wow, these are really good. They look so real. I can't even pick a favourite, I love them all. The second one is the most impressive though ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I thought that this was a very touching poem and I liked it. I liked it because I can relate to it and ...

Hello there :) Your drawings are pretty good I should say. I'm not a huge expert in drawing nor do I know what Maga is. So I'll just give a ...

Hello there :) A paramore fan, yay! Anyway, back to business. I will be honest, I thought this poem was not satisfying. It was kind of bland and without emotion ...

Hello there Impressive. I think you have potential. The body looks great. I just think the arm on the left (my left ;) ) is a little bigger than it's ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I think love is a wide topic and you kind of chose the predictable normal route that I see over and over. Like ...

Hello there :) This is definitely a different topic from what I see every day. It was a start. I think though that it was not the most creative approach ...