ziggiefred

Hello there :) Firstly, omg, you listen to Queen's of the stoneage? I'm not a fan, but omg. I absolutely love it. I think it's better than the first one ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I think the biggest turn off about your poem is the lack of punctuation. For that reason, it's hard to grasp any emotion, ...

Hello there :) I'm not much of a poet myself, but this was really good. Although I have seen the whole overshadowed, underdog theme before, I loved the way you ...

Hello there :) This is quite a powerful story. I would give you a much more detailed review but I don't have much time left. There were a few spelling ...

Hello there :) “Are you sure this is what you want to spend your money on, Rebecca?” The girl’s mother asked, looking at the girl with stern eyes. “I won’t ...

Hello there Missy :) It looks good. I like how everything is building up and where the events are going. This is a very creative story, I can't wait until ...

Hello there :) Nice. Out of all the poems I've reviewed today, this is by far the most honest and creative. I like the unique syllable thing which I think ...

Hello there :) I'm with Lilchoma on this one. I think that you seem to have everything so lightly written that it loses the poetic sense in terms of emotion ...

Hello there :) Now I'm not much of a poet but I'll do my best to tell you what I think. It was okay. I mean most of the time ...

Hey there :) I hope I don't sound harsh or anything but I did not enjoy this. Yes there are bits in there that are creative like the repetition of ...

Hello there :) Since you are relatively new, welcome to YWS I really liked the poem...the first three stanzas that is. I could feel a lot of emotion and the ...

Thank you so much for that. You don't understand how much your review helped. Writing the story in first person, I think I'm going to try that so as to ...

Hello there :) Well I'm not really a poet, I have to say, I thought the first two lines were spot on perfect. I was a little disappointed that you ...

Hey :D So, would you like to review my short story then? Thank you and thank you.

Hello there :) Now I'm no photographer, so I don't the lingo or what people are looking at to analyse photos so I'll just give my honest opinion :D . ...