ziggiefred

Hello there and welcome :) I will have to agree with the previous reviewer on certain levels about the poem. First of all I felt that the whole structure was ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) When I saw the title of this poem, I was a little under the impression that I was going to read about crickets...well ...

Hello there Shadowlight! :) Well I thought the plot so far is quite creative. Now I'm going to take this as an abstract instead of a well established story because ...

Hello there :) I understand what creative approach you were going for here and it's kind of catchy. However, out of all the stanza's I had a problem with the ...

Hey there. I think I reviewed your story earlier if I'm not wrong. So you have a masters in Biology but you're 21? That's pretty awesome and wow. I'm just ...

Hello there :) The slip of your tonge The turn of my world. The treachery undeniable The conciquence unavoidable. I loved this stanza, it was just so flawless; well except ...

Hello there :) Since you're relatively new, welcome to YWS! At first I really did not get what was going on in this poem. I think the major problem is ...

Hello there :) To be honest, there is nothing really special about this poem. It's very plain and simple. I think the only commendable thing about it is the fact ...

Hello there :) One ruthlessly cold English day in the Autumn of 1926 a rather important child was born, into a rather unfortunate family. The Lynch family were not unfortunate ...

Hello there :) I really liked the simplicity of your piece. You had some great vivid descriptions in there. The story was not rusty at all. A warm breeze found ...

Hello there :) The previous reviewer kind of outlined a lot I wanted to say so I'll just state the obvious. I think your writing is really good. Your descriptions ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I felt his hand on my wiry bicep, the dull dig of his dirty nails. The touch sent a chill of disgust snaking ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I'll start with the bad. I thought that your story, though interesting, was very hard to follow at certain levels. This is because ...

Hello there :) I think what you have here is just fine.The whole thing is exactly what I was expecting to see when I saw the title "Insomnia", which makes ...

Hello there :) I just couldn't resist reviewing this. Well for one it was definitely better than the previous poem of yours that I read. I always admire an attempt ...