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Hello there :) It is kind of hard to believe that this is your first poem ever because it is really good. It is very romantic. For your eyes and ...

Hello there :) As I was reading this, I could not help but picturing someone on stage performing a monologue for a school play. I found this a bot over ...

Hello there bro, and welcome to YWS! :) I really loved this a lot. I liked how everything is just going in circles. I also commend you for saying a ...

Hello there :) Now this is a really good poem, I liked it. You pretty much have a good hold over your words and you phrased some so beautifully. I’m ...

Hello there :) You have got a really good control over your words. I just love the way you write. It's so descriptive and the imagery is fantastic. I really ...

Hello there :) I think this would be better if you expanded it a bit more. It's a great concept, it just lacks detail because you crammed everything into one ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) hmm, a poem that makes me think...After reading this, I had my own interpretation. I thought this poem was saying that there are ...

Hello there 'socks' :) I really liked this story. I also really liked your writing style and the suspense you kept going until the end. This was a very sad ...

Hello there :) First of all Oh what are men to rocks and mountains? Oh what you are to me! I really loved these two lines. So romantic! Anyway, I ...

Hello there :) This was a very interesting plot. I felt however that you did a lot of telling and very little showing. In this type of story where the ...

Hello there :) Welcome to YWS! I'm going to sound repetitive here but the title is very disappointing. The contents of the poem have nothing to do with the title. ...

Hello there :) I really liked this a lot. Very gripping. I do not think it was confusing. I'm always a fan of flashbacks and you pulled this one off. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I will commend you for writing a poem of this manner. I like how you twisted your words in every line instead of ...

Hello there :) I think for a person who does not write poems, this was pretty well done. However, my biggest problem with this was the use of too many ...

Hello there :) There was a problem with you sentence structures. "Roses... Flowers for love..." The girl said (there should be a full stop here) (start a new sentence) as ...