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Hello there :) This was really funny. At first, before I got to the end, I thought we were talking about a man. Anyway, this was hilarious. I need you. ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) The thing that impressed me the most about this poem is the general idea. I thought it was very creative and I loved ...

Hello there :) I thought this poem was okay. The only thing special about it was the repetition of the words "this is humanity". Other than that, I guess I ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) There were quite a number of spelling and grammatical errors in your story, but I can see that the previous reviewer has outlined ...

Hello there :) I agree with Ashley. I found the letter very plain. Meaning that the person to whom it is intended will not feel that bad after reading it. ...

Hello there :) First of, I love your avatar! Alright, back to the review. I haven’t drinken alcohol or smoked anything or snuck out of my house or lied to ...

You know what, Hawk? You and I are a lot alike. If I was not so intent on becoming a chef one day, I would probably be in medical school ...

Yes, I need a backup. However, most of the time, I can't shake the feeling that I should be starting my path as a chef instead, it's frustrating. hehe My ...

Hello there silentRain :) I really like the concept of this poem, it's very creative. I loved the emotions and how colourful your descriptions were. However, some points in this ...

Hello there :) You're meant to accepting, I think you missed something in this line. Try revising it. Wow, I really loved this. I could really relate, you know. First ...

Hello there :) “I cooked Eliza and you some oatmeal for breakfast. Make the lunches and make sure Eliza takes her pill with her breakfast. Watch Eliza after school. Remind ...

Hehe, that's so much a coincidence. Well, there are very few opportunities in my country so it's better to pursue a degree in culinary school with something to fall back ...

Hello there :) Wow, you did this in your computer? It's pretty impressive. I can't draw anything on my computer. Now I'm not an artsy person so I don't really ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I really loved the way you handled the personification of death; the way you gave death a voice. First of all it was ...

Hello there :) I just have one question; how is the poem related to the title? I'm sorry, I tried and tried to crack the code but I failed. Besides ...