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Oooh. hehe; I never would have guessed what @)!) would have meant. Thanks for clearing that up. It was very creative I must admit; and you were right. The only ...

Hello there :) I really love the idea behind this poem. It's very creative and different from what I see everyday. However, the poem itself to me seemed a little ...

Hello there :) This poem is utterly deep and I can totally relate to it. I don't think I've seen it before but it was quite good. What I don't ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I really liked your poem. However, as I was reading it, I could not help but feel that the rhyming was a bit ...

Hello there :) I was young. I was sick. Did I know you? Did I comprehend? I really liked this repetition. I think that "comprehend" is a very broad term ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) What really bothered me about this poem was the fact that there was no punctuation. You had such beautiful lines but they had ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) Mine is a short comment. I really liked the consistent rhyming you had through out this poem. Sometimes poems tend to have a ...

Hello there :) Well, I don't understand why this never got published :D . The story line is really creative and your writing style is very good. I liked the ...

Hello there :) But luckily for us, Sam’s parents didn’t really pay much attention to her. Don't start your sentences with "but". The gales seemed to be speaking to me, ...

Hello there :) I just adore romantic poems, especially when they are well written such as this one. Your approach was really creative and charming, it just took the words ...

Hello there :) First of all, I admire you for keeping the rhyme in this poem through out the poem! I quite enjoyed it. However, as personal preference, a poem ...

Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) I really found this interesting. I commend you for building a pyramid out of words. I'll take it as a statement. What I ...

Hello there :) I really liked how light hearted this poem is. It reminds me of a nursery rhyme or something like a children's story of some sort. It's different ...

Hello there :) First of all, He didn’t have the privilege to tell me where or elaborate on his demands - I really loved the use of the word "privilege" ...

Hello there :) First of all, I have never seen snow before because it doesn't snow where I live and so I was expecting to get the feel from your ...