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Re: Inferno Chapter 1
Hello there :) Kafka ha already given you a good review so I'll just add on to it I guess. So generally, first impression of this chapter was that I ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Drying blood has been taken down
Hello there :) Whew, I finally made it. Everything, combined with a sick computer has just thrown me off track, but I'm here. After reading that story you sent me, ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Lyrics and songs that inspire you.
Hey "TheRose". I'm going to have to represent on this one. Jimmi Hendrix. I've been pretty much going over his songs and lyrics and uncovering what they really mean and ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Cold School Chapter 1
Hello there :) I'll begin with the nitpicks With all the girls it wasn't so bad but all my former guys friends would harrass me daily. Okay, I think that's ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Love & War
Hello there :) I'll start off with the nitpicks. These days, the comments just tended to roll off me. ...or nitpick, anyway! So I found this story rather cute and ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: The Blob
Hello there :) Looks like you haven't had any reviews done yet, so get reviewing ;) So this is an interesting story and concept, but I found there is more ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Spelunker: The Ascent
Hello there :) Since you're relatively new, welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here. Looks as if you haven't had any reviews done yet, so you better get ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Visions Of Horror pt 1 of 2
Hello there :) I felt I had to review this because I don't think I've ever read any of your work. So, here I am :) I'll first off start ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: A Single Rose
'Elo there dogs :) Now you have to know, I quit poetry a while ago and so I've kind of lost touch on how to review poems. But since I ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Guns and Roses
Thank you all for the wonderful input. :)
Oct 15, 2011 -
Re: The Review Bureau;)
Hello :) Pleaaaaaase....and thank you! The story is called Guns and Roses. Thank you :)
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Vervain's Review Lair
Hello, thought I'd make the first request. WARNING: I will tear your piece to shreds. Please, go ahead :) Thank you :)
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: Guns and Roses
Okay, I haven't edited this yet, but I thought I'd just post it. If you've read my previous stories you'll notice that this is almost the same situation as in ...
Oct 11, 2011 -
Re: A Lamentation on Singlehood
Hello there :) First of all, Amen sister! You took the words right out of my mouth. I'm constantly denying it, but being single sucks sometimes. 5% makes a huuuuge ...
Sep 27, 2011 -
Re: Road to Nowhere (Chapter Two)
Hello there :) I finally made it. So my comments will sort of match the ones I made for the first chapter as everything is pretty much still the same. ...
Sep 25, 2011
