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Hello there :) My first review in months so here goes! I opened my eyes and stared at my bedroom ceiling. “It’s going to be a boring Sunday,” I thought. ...

Hello there Jash. I wasn't really going to say anything because other users have said so much already, so mine's just a comment. Anyway, you are really talented! and that's ...

Hello there :) As I was reading this, I could not help but feel that your lines were practically hanging onto nothing- no solid concept. So the poem in general ...

Hello there :) This is really good, I love it. Now I'm not much of an artist so I don't have any constructive criticism towards this as I wouldn't know ...

Hello there :) Well, this is bad writing, hehe. Taking it light heartedly, this could really make a good children's story. You know, the Cinderella type. Just throw in a ...

I like drama; you know, some Tyler Perry sort of things. I don't know where it falls in the poll so I'll pick 'other'.

Hello there :) I'll just come out and say that I really didn't like this one very much. I think the general impression I get when reading your poem is ...

Hello there Delo could not think why the nobles would come to the slums but whatever there reason, The wispy shadow of fog lurked on the surface of the river ...

Hello there :) I need you to defrost me, I thought water was already defrosted. I think this line does not make sense in conjunction with the statement you made ...

Are you going for a little digital point and shoot/compact? Or a DSLR? If you're going for a DSLR, I'd reccomened a Nikon D3100, or a Sony a290. The Canon ...

Thank you so much for the input :D Your comments have me so excited to taking more photos; with much more things to consider, that is. Your comments have actually ...

This is my first post in "art and photography" and my first post in the new year, yay! :D Anyway, these are photos I took from my mother's flower bed. ...

Hello there :) I have a few nit picks that I'd like to discuss. The train hit the car that was stopped on the tracks with such an enormous amount ...

Hello there :) Yikes, this is a lot. I like your innovative list, haha. I think I should make one of these to keep my life entertained. 90. Be rich ...

Hey lilgrendots. :) Yes, this is much better. I actually found it to be more gutsy and bold than the last one. Also, this proves that the narrator can be ...