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Re: The Story Of Me ; Ch.1
Hello there :) I was sixteen when I found out that I was kidnapped at the age of five. All I knew was that I had been 'adopted' at the ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: I don't even
Hello there :) I thought I'd step up and do the honours! I'm not going to do any crushing, but I am going to be nitpicky ;) “Wow Kalypso, you’re ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: What's wrong with this as a Beginning?
Hello there :) So on the bright side, your writing is really good. Like I was honestly enjoying your effortless flow of words and how you described certain things. However, ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: My little hold
Hello there :) So I thought this was not that bad. So cold, and my little hold, cannot contain me…. I especially enjoyed the little repetition you had going on ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Gerard Butler or Chris Hemsworth?
There is no doubt it's Gerard. Did you watch 300?...okay, I didn't either, but I saw the trailer a few years back ;)
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm....
Hey welcome! I love your avatar, first of all. I'm certain you're going to love it here. So how many books have you completed?
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Disgrace to Wolf Picture 2
Hello there :) I love this, I really do. The drawing is really well done and I just want to applaud the idea of drawing your characters. It's a great ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) As the moom casts a spell on the land. Dance to the wolf's own song As he sings to his one lady fair. ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: If Only
Hello there Hello there :) Oh, and welcome to YWS! :) his eyes so innocent, but yet it burns like a fire in the night, staring ever so deep into ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: In ten years time
Hello there and welcome to YWS! :) So I see you've already got some reviews done, good job! Anyway back to business. So I see a lot potential in this ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: the wait.
Hello there :) a man lied on a bench memories rippled the canal rippled his bottle of gin hugged his smokers cough and embraced his heavy sigh. Please add some ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Read this book!
Hey. That's cool, so who's the author?
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: How are you??
Hehe, you are weird! in a good way. The last time I played video games, they were still 2D, a long time ago. Welcome! and get your reviewing on! :)
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Feed
Hello there :) Since you are reviewing like crazy today, I thought I would give some of your work a look! ;) So I've never read this book either and ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Prologue: A Country on Edge
Hello there :) As much as I appreciate that this is full of all the information, it kind of strikes me as more of a synopsis than a prologue. It ...
May 29, 2011
