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Re: Glittering Frost
great poem! i don't see any mistake in it. perfectly beautiful =D
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Appreciate
WOW! it was a great poem. it really is great but requires another look at it. These words you are saying Don’t really make that much sense For some things ...
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Re: Fighting Against the Devil
it is pretty great but i believe in the last few paragraphs: if a man is supposed to be morally good before he was wronged, then why did you inspire ...
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: chapter 1 of an untitled story
1) whats avatar the last airbender? 2) i noticed the lack of info at the beginning, still editing. thanks again for your comments =D
Nov 29, 2010 -
Re: Dragon Riders
Name: Zee Age: 14 Gender: Male Appearance: Dark hair straight backwards hair, dark pale skin, dark brown eyes, high cheek bones, broad facial features. Personality: Unpredictable History: Unknown. amn
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: chapter 1 of an untitled story
lol, the village name was the 1st thing that came to my head. changed it to vartala and googled it to make sure it wasn't used b4 =D only 4 ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: chapter 1 of an untitled story
CHAPTER ONE Exterior patrol was the most boring chore everywhere but the most important. All towns were at risk of an attack in the endless days of war and yet ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: 1 question
im new here and i have 1 question: is this site teens only? like no one over 19 can join or post or review or anything? =D
Nov 19, 2010 -
Re: Dreamwalker
hey there! i, myself, am still new here (joined 1 day after you ???) but i have some xp in writing and reading and i think you are still a ...
Nov 18, 2010
