zephion

This sounds really cool, but like others said,possibly used. I think that you could do something with it though. Make it as original as possible. Be sure that all ideas ...

I don't think that it's too complicated, but it will be hard to put into text. You will have to be sure to differ between characters to limit confusion. I ...

Sounds like you may need to work on your hook. You should surprise the reader with the first few lines, interested them, and make sure that interest lingers so that ...

I'm a playwright! I started off with short stories, but I just couldn't create the level of detail needed, so I tried writing some ten minute plays and they went ...

I like Running with the Dead or Apocalypse Rising. Both of them are very original and definitely sound cool.

Here's an idea. Perhaps the main character or hero attempts to close off the leak of mana. To find the source and block it from use. I suppose that would ...