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it's great i really like the verse You know evening is the day, that the teens are now adults. Colleges offer jobs that pay, yearn of families not far away. ...

that's wicked i really like this verse Look, Stop, Right there behind you. Can't you see you're not wanted here? An unwelcome stranger, Crossing the gate, You should've stayed on ...

( i like i like) this bit is good The world is moving fast, quaking like volcanic eruption mania disease the poem is excellant 8)

very intresting i really like this bit To alley cat, hissing and witty All enchanted with titty Bitty pieces of the heart Piled and taken on a cart To a ...

:shock: that's amazing i like the verse The fire’s licking tongues Cast whispers without tune And they’ve caught me in the darkness Where the garish marks that make me beautiful ...

i like the It’s bittersweet, the way they taste Too often much like blood And though bleeding life breeds far more pain Than it does of over The remedy’s in ...

i like the use of rhyme keep it up 8)

8) wicked i like the bit where it says I look at him with humane rage thats cool

its alright if its short because it was still good

:shock: amazing. if you keep this up you will probably be in the top ten for poets. Please spell check your posts before submitting them, and try to use correct ...

i didn't exactly see the first chapter but i think that this one's gggggggrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeaaaaaaatttttt :D

i'm new too and i'm also a slow writer and trust you will like this website

i've got a friend whose a Jehovah's Witnesses. it's good your happy

all of it was amazing :D