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i automatically saw the middle part and got it. =D good try though.

i totally agree with you. i have ridden a camel, lol, but i still think that it's wrong when people stereotype me because i'm arab. good poem. i liked it ...

I liked this passage because it was very detailed and it felt as if I was there in the room witching the scene. I think you should continue this story ...

I loved it. If there were any grammar mistakes or anything, I wouldn't have noticed because I fell in love with this piece. It keeps me puzzled and makes me ...

If you had not told us that you wrote that in 6 minutes and 34 seconds I would think it would take you a long time to come up with ...

If this passage was a preview on a book I would read it. However, this passage alone left me puzzled. To me, it made no sence. If there were more ...

I liked it but all the things that was found wrong and writen in bold you should just re-edit and post it again. I hope there is more because I ...

It felt wierd... seeing my parents standing in front of me, after all that time. What had been days felt like centuries. I was happy to see them, yet upset ...

I enjoyed reading your work and I look forward to reading more of it in the future. I like how you ended the chapter because you left me wanting more. ...

This sounds weird but I'd takemy anger out on whatever bad person I see in the streets and by that I mean, rapists, muggers etc. :) Hope I helped.

Thanks sooo much! You're probably in for a lot of dissapointment though.

So I think that I am a terrible writer but for some reason my cousin, Jasminebells (as you know her), loves my writing. She kind of forced me to get ...