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Re: The Shades Of The Heart (Ch1)
Hey, Spike! I really liked the title and synopsis of this piece, so I thought I’d stop by. ^_^ Just some really quick advice—I think it would help out if ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Too Soon - Chapter 2
Hi, Jane—told you I’d be back. ;) I really like the greater development of your world and its background that we’re getting with this chapter. It was really interesting to ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Sand in a Bottle - Part One of Chapter One (Katie)
Hi there! I’m Zan, it’s nice to meet you. Welcome to YWS, I hope you’re enjoying yourself here! I thought I’d take a look at this story because the title ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: Too Soon - Chapter 1
Hey, there, Jane, nice to meet you! I’ve been gone from YWS a while, so forgive me if I do anything wrong here. ^^; Anyway, this story’s title and synopsis ...
May 19, 2010 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Nine (Part B)
Hey there. I know it’s taken me a frightfully long time to review this, and I’m really sorry. I’ve just been really tired and school has been a lot of ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Nine (Part A)
Hello there! I know I’m a bit late, sorry, these last few days of school have been kinda busy. ^^;; I’m afraid I’m probably not going to get to comment ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 2
Hi there! Again, sorry for the delay in writing this, like I said, getting ready for school and then starting it really cut into my writing-related time. XD Anyway! Awww, ...
Sep 5, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Eight
OMG, I’m so sorry—I have no idea why I didn’t see that this was up two days ago. *headdesk* Well, I’m here now. XD I kinda feel like a giant ...
Aug 29, 2009 -
Re: The Big Leagues (Vampire Contest)
Hi there! Always delighted to read more of your work, I’m coming after this poor story now. :D First of all: I really like your idea for this. I’ve heard ...
Aug 25, 2009 -
Re: Mission Zero
Hi there! Since you left such a nice review on the first chapter of The Trouble with Titanium, I thought I ought to stop by—and I’m glad I did! (By ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: Oddities under an Office Block - Part 2
*waves arms* Sorry I was so late getting to the latest chapter of this, I’ve just been a bit busy getting ready for school and such. Okay! That was a ...
Aug 16, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Seven (Part B)
Hello there~. I’m back to review! Again. I know you’re just devastated. XD I liked the opening scene between Jyuna and Tey. I actually think you did a good job ...
Aug 15, 2009 -
Re: Forgiveness is for Sinners- a western romance story
Hi there! I’m Zan. I was browsing the forums and I noticed that this story looked a little lonely, review-wise, so I thought I’d stop by! ^_^ Wow! I like ...
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: The Inch - The Full Story - Chapter 1
Hi there! I’m Zan. Haven’t seen you around before, so welcome to YWS! I noticed that your later couple of chapters looked kinda lonely, so I’m stopping by to review! ...
Aug 9, 2009 -
Re: The End of Time Chapter Seven (Part A)
Whee, chapter seven! I really look forward to reading these. ^_^ Wow. That was… pretty epic. XD I really like how this chapter turned out, I don’t think you have ...
Aug 9, 2009
