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Whee, another chapter! I enjoyed reading this, it was a lot of fun. ^_^ I liked the character development between Clover and Ivory here, watching Clover get over his shyness ...

Hi there! I’m here, as promised. Late though. XD Sorry. I really like your voice in this piece, it helped us feel immediately like we knew Logan and understood him ...

Sorry that this one is so short, I had a ridiculous amount of difficulty trying to come up with something to criticize about this chapter. Matter of fact is, I ...

Wow. I really think this chapter is a big improvement over the previous one. The character development was much more believable here, and in turn, it helped make your characters ...

Sorry I’m so late on this one. I’ve been having major computer issues, but I think my poor laptop is doing better now. *huggles her* (Yes, my laptop is a ...

Yay, chapter four! ^_^ Oooh, complications! Very nice plot twist—I wasn’t expecting it at all. Carly, at least, has officially become a member of the secondary cast I’m not going ...

Hey there! This was a pretty interesting beginning, and it piqued my curiosity pretty much instantly, which is just about the most important thing a beginning can do. (Also, I ...

*Waves* Hi there! Wow, I really like how this chapter adds a bit of development to everyone. The way you’ve given the rest of the main character’s group differing opinions ...

Wow, interesting development. I’m definitely getting more of a sense of your main character, now, and her angry reaction blasting through her previously slick and cool personality adds another dimen

Okay, I’m going to guess that this is a re-written version of the prologue, and this version sounds even better. I liked that the characters’ personalities were coming out a ...

Hm… well, this is definitely an interesting opening! I’ll admit I was more than a bit lost, but I’m going to go out on a limb here and guess that ...

Whee, chapter eight! I really enjoyed reading this, your characters and sense of humor are always fantastic. The whole conversation between Clover and Ivory was very well done, it made ...

Aaaaugh, I suck. XD Why is it I never get around to reviewing your stuff in a timely manner? I feel like such a jerk. XD Oookay, first things first: ...

Okay, first and foremost, I have to say that I kind of love Alejandro. XD Just… OMG. He is so hilarious and generally cool, and there is no way not ...

Gah! I feel awful that I’m always so late about reviewing your work. XD I’ll keep trying, though. Maybe I can catch up so I won’t feel like such a ...