zankoku_na_tenshi

Okay, here's chapter two, after a very, very long break. XD Tear it up, guys! :D Let me know if it's too long-- I'm willing to cut it into two ...

Hi there, lunahlove! I’m Zan. ^_^ I know you’ve gotten good, detailed reviews already (Snoink is pure reviewing love), but I liked the concept of this story, so I thought ...

Hi again, Legendaryrose! Thought I’d stop by and drop you a review. ^_^ This was another pretty interesting chapter, I like how it revealed more about the world of your ...

Hi again, Attolia! Wow, I really enjoyed this chapter. The first chapter was excellent already, but this one sealed the deal—I will definitely be returning to read chapter three! Again, ...

Hi there, LegendaryRose! I’m Zan, it’s nice to meet you. ^_^ I liked your title, and your summary seemed interesting, so I thought maybe I’d stop by and leave you ...

Hello! I’m Zan, I don’t think we’ve met? Anyway, I thought I’d stop by and take a look at this story here. : ) Looks like you’ve already got a ...

Ahoy! Once again, this is a great chapter for introducing and building up these character’s personalities. I really do like Eve, she seems like the sort of character who is ...

Hi, there, carden! I’m Zan. I liked the synopsis of your story a lot and I thought I’d stop by—I love historical fiction and I used to read a lot ...

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Hey, Spike! I really liked the title and synopsis of this piece, so I thought I’d stop by. ^_^ Just some really quick advice—I think it would help out if ...

Hey there, NiteStrike! Welcome to YWS! :) I'm Zan. Glad to see you're having a good time here so far, I love it too-- YWS forumgoers are the nicest forumgoers ...

Hi, Jane—told you I’d be back. ;) I really like the greater development of your world and its background that we’re getting with this chapter. It was really interesting to ...

Hi there! Haha, it took me a second to get your username. XD Anyway, welcome to YWS! It sure has changed a lot in the last few years, huh? But ...

Hey, there, lonelychild! Nice to meet you. I'm Zan! I love your introductory poem, it's neat. ^_^ Hope you're enjoying yourself here on YWS, I'd be glad to review some ...

Hi there! I’m Zan, it’s nice to meet you. Welcome to YWS, I hope you’re enjoying yourself here! I thought I’d take a look at this story because the title ...